Yesterday evening, I mentioned that the 3rd act of Receiver was likely to move pretty quick...

Wow.  Just about everything held up under the weight of the new changes.  There's one or two things I've changed.  The ending is a lot clearer emotionally, we have more reason to doubt Andy knows what he's doing, and it's largely the same.  Mattie, I think, comes off a lot stronger.

In the last two drafts, I changed a lot in that stretch of film.  It works.  In this draft, nothing really jumped at me.

And now it's done, until I figure out where the next batch of work needs to go.  I might just take a little break for a few days!  I have plans on Wednesday to get into my first tabletop game since I was playtesting Action Storytelling.  It's been years.  We'll be playing Aeon Trinity, for those who know my creative bibliography.

At the same time, I really want Education ship-shape for sale...